Wednesday, September 24, 2014

Term Review

 On the second to last day of the term poutama was doing a term review for what their highlights were, what they achieved in their learning and what they wish. I put a lot of effort into my learning that it was really hard to chose which one I liked the most.


Thursday, September 18, 2014

Drama With Nic

WALT: Develop ideas, skills and concepts in drama

A. Focus - become the character, placement, patience. Yes
B. Accept Ideas and build on them. Yes
C. Levels - make it interesting for the viewer. Middle
D. Space - balanced, using a mixture of all the space, don’t bunch up. Middle
E. Finish on time. Yes
F. Be Spontaneous. Middle
G. Centre stage - main idea is always in this position. Yes
H. Contribute and participate. Yes

Matrix showing what you think and what your inquiry teacher thinks.


Description:  At school room 6,9,11,12,13 and 14 have been doing inquiry altogether. When I say altogether I mean altogether but with different teachers. Steven inquiry class is learning about houses, Kerri's inquiry class is doing cooking, Nic's inquiry class is doing drama, Ebony's  inquiry class is making different clothes, Elly's inquiry class is doing art and Troy's inquiry class is learning about language and countries. I am in Nic's inquiry class.



Evaluation:
1. What are you most proud of? I am most proud of getting my play done because it was hard to practice the play when me and my group had trouble working together. 
2. What did you find challenging? I found working together challenging because my group weren't practicing at all they were being silly and not contributing.
3.  My next ‘Get It’ goal is? My next get it goal is practitioner.



















Tuesday, September 16, 2014

Inquiry

In inquiry we have been learning to stay focus and reflect on how we stayed focused. We used ECG which means emotion cognition and growth. Here is my reflection and second video.










Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Reading Article

W.A.L.T: Read accurately, with expression and understand what we read.


Description: We have been reading articles from around the world about peculiar news.

Task: Respond to the article you have just read using full sentences.
1. Who is the main person or group of people in this news article? The main person in this article is 2 truck drivers and another person in the truck.
2. What was the key event from the news article? The key event in this article was the driver lost control of the wheel and the truck fell onto the grass spilling all the money.
3. Where did this event take place? The article took place Rhode Island, USA
4. When did this event take place? September 2 2014
5. Why did this event happen? The event happened because the driver found it hard to steer the wheel and lost control.
Evaluation:
1. What do you think is the best part of the article? Reading the article and finding out what happened.
2. What was the hardest part about completing this portfolio sample? It was hard to answer the question because I don't no a lot about the article and most people think they no everything.
3.  Next time, what is a goal you can work towards? Next time my goal to work on is to understand and now what I am reading.

Feedback/Feedforward:  I think that Taylor has done a great job I like how she said she doesn't know a lot about this article because people say I know everything about this and I think you could work a little more writing.


truck
An armoured truck overturned on a highway in Rhode Island, USA,  causing bags of money to spill all over the road which quickly caught the attention of other drivers.
Police say the driver lost control and the truck swerved off the highway onto the grass and tipped onto its side.
Both the driver and the other person in the truck received cuts and bruises and possibly neck and back injuries.
The money was in clear plastic bags and canvas duffel bags and the scene of the accident was soon swarming with passers-by but police are unsure whether any money was taken.
A second truck was called and the money was transferred as police supervised and kept passers-by away from the scene

Math Sample

WALT: Extend a repeating picture patten using number strategies.

Description: For maths this term we have been learning a range of strategies to help us solve algebra problems.


Task:  Make a short movie to prove that you have achieved your maths goal.


Criteria: 

  • Show, explain, prove your goal and how you did it
  • Clear message
  • Two questions to show your learning
  • Correct answer


Evaluation:
  1. What are you most proud of and why? I am most proud of my whole poster because it showed what I was learning.


  1. What challenged you the most and why? Making the poster was the most challenging because it was hard for me to think what to put on my poster.


  1. Next time, what is a goal you can work towards? My goal next time would be to move up a goal after I have finished my poster or movie and proved it.

Feedback/Feedforward: Great work Taylor I really liked the way you showed the understanding of how you use the goal and how you showed how you worked it out. Milania :)


Tuesday, September 9, 2014

Roll On The Wall

In my inquiry group we are doing plays and freeze frames mixed together. We had to out line our character in our day book or on our device and the words inside our person have to be things they are about.

































































































Thursday, September 4, 2014

My What If Story

W.A.L.T: entertain

Description: In week 6 term 3 Troy's writing group was writing about a what if story. The starting of the sentence had to be what if you woke up and all the clocks in the world went dead. Once you were done the first story you could make your own what if story.

Evaluation: What part did you most enjoy? I enjoyed the first paragraph because I think it will hook the reader in.
What was the hardest part? The hardest part for me was getting my story done because it wax a really long story to write.
What would you work on next time? Next time I would work on making my story shorter because it is a really long story.

Feedback/feedforward: I think you did a good job at your writing. I think you need to work on making your story shorter. Aalaa

Here is my what if story.

What if you woke up and all the clocks in the world went dead and the time froze? You were the only one moving and all your friends were moving too. What would you do?

Well I can tell you that I was once stuck in time and the clocks weren't moving. I was the only one moving and all my sisters and friends were moving too. Keep on reading so you know how to get out of a problem like this.

Me my sisters and friends started to pack our bags with lots of food, lots of, water bottles with different flavours, we also packed our clothes, sleeping bags, pillows and some blankets and all the stuff we needed to survive. We got our jackets on and headed out the door with our big heavy bags on our backs. At least our bags had big strong wheels on the bottom and a long elastic string that attaches to anything.

We put our scooters in our bags and put our helmets on and started riding on our bikes.     

We brought our money incase we run out of food or water but I dealt that. We started to ride down the road but then I said "I forgot the bike pump". So we turned around and got the bike pump.

We were riding down the road almost about to leave Palmerston North. We went past the sign that said Palmerston North. I turned back and all I could see was a empty city with no cars or people. 

There were no cars coming and entering Palmerston North. We were riding for a long time so we stopped and had a snack. We ate some popcorn, oranges, nut bars and some cake.

We started to hit the road on our scooters. If your wondering where our bikes would go they can fold up and fit into a bag. We were almost entering this city called Lower Hutt. 

We saw a purple thing coming from the plaza connecting to the sky. We realized that the purple thing was stopping all the clocks in the world. We put our scooters away in our bags and started to run. When we got to the plaza we went up the escalator to see who was doing this to the world.

We found the person who did all this miss. Her name was Creepy  Coney. She was so creepy nobody liked her. She stole some toys from kids. Well actually she only stole the toys from the boys that she liked.

She said she was doing it because she, was doing the same thing as her mum and dad. "Nothing can stop me now" she said.

We thought really hard and then we knew that the clocks stop working when it is wet. So maybe if we wet the purple thing maybe everything would be back to normal. We put the water on the purple thing and then everything went back to normal. We got to Palmerston North and everyone was moving. I went and hugged my mum and dad because everything was back to normal. 

What if we were stuck in snow forever?